cyclopseven Ram

Rookie - 67 Points (20 January 1965 / Malaysia)

Her Eyes I - Poem by cyclopseven Ram

Her eyes glows
sparing no space too close
my vision melts into her gaze
as she looks at me to say some words.
my heart pounds in graceful pattern
carrying her vision down deep into the cavern
unforgettable indeed that day that passed by
too fast unto eternity everything flows sweetly,

like a blooming rose
she stares at me above the nose.


Her eyes II

Her eyes, a mysterious veil
At each glance she casts upon me
I see diamond-flash is no comparison
to the sparkles from her eyes.
This inscrutable attachment of attraction
Lingers strong, and clear in my mind
Particularly that of her eyes that speaks
The unknown language of soul captivating expression

Of splendor I know not
And I stand, enthralled to the stare I care much.


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Comments about Her Eyes I by cyclopseven Ram

  • Rookie Trinity K (9/4/2008 1:48:00 AM)

    ............captive within my soul
    i tried to ignore i swear
    .............long enough to get
    addicted to another's soul..............! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !


    ... beautiful..
    thnx for sharing... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Trinity K (9/4/2008 1:46:00 AM)

    ............captive within my soul
    i tried to ignore i swear
    .............long enough to get
    addicted to another's soul..............! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !


    ... beautiful..
    thnx for sharing... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 4, 2008



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