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hi time

I began writing as I was ill
Then the dark sun came out to push my will
I abandoned bad thoughts, the sickness I do fought
Now ı am back, it is raining unusually
How I wished my thoughts were those for goodness

I came down with relentless empathy
Hooked on its greatness, such a tragedy
Needlessly I once released from my obsession and granted solitude
The stories of those marked seep in to my dreams
I served for this post restlessly, I demand now
Heal me

Submitted: Sunday, July 01, 2012


Comments about this poem (hi time by Milan Baro )

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  • Ralph The Elf (7/2/2012 8:12:00 AM)

    you are already well

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  • Godfrey Morris (7/1/2012 8:38:00 PM)

    Yes indeed you'll find your healing. Do continue to write.

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