High Poem by WATER LOTUS

High

Rating: 3.5


Missed the grand opening at Giza
Cause I left my crystal in the freezer.
Stood up Noah at the ark
To meet my dealer in Central Park.
I passed on the crucifixion,
Preferred to feed my coke addiction.
Too hip for Woodstock
Picking up prescriptions at the doc.
Too busy for burning Man
Smoking refer in the can.
Planned to share the hemlock with Socrates
But had to give my nose a tease.
Thinking I may be missing something
But I've got a habit, I have to please.
Gotta get high, gotta get high gotta get high
That's my history, my mystery
Gotta get high

Thursday, July 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: bio,mind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chukwuebuka Emmanuel 07 July 2017

Nice one

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Seamus O Brian 06 July 2017

This piece has a air of whimsy about it, its humorous imagery lying on the surface of a much deeper current, like a film of diesel glistening iridescently on the surface of a harbor whose true depths might only be guessed. The humor belies the otherwise obvious warning that much of the richness of life, many of the amazing aspects of living might be totally missed in the inward retreat of the drug-altered mindscape. 1,200 deaths a week in 2016 due to drug-overdose in the U.S.; the equivalent of 119 fully loaded 747 aircraft crashing into the ground with everyone dying. Every week, week after week, two more fully loaded aircraft crashing with no survivors. How long would it take for panic to ensue? How long before we wake up to this Ebola virus burning in our midst? Thank you for shining the light on this difficult subject so artistically.

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