मंझधार में अटकी है मौला, मेरी कश्ती पार लगा देना
हम अपना ज़ोर लगा बैठे, तुम अपना ज़ोर दिखा देना
बचपन से हमने ये ही सुना, हिम्मते मरदां मददे ख़ुदा
कोशिश को हमारी बल देना, बन्दों का कष्ट मिटा देना
Bahut Khoob, sirf Hindi hi nahin aap Urdu mein bhi lajawab hayn.
Bahut badiya...Aameen, Kya baat hai aapki dua'a padhkar 2 lines dil mein aagayi Hum sab teri rehmat ke mohtaaj hain apna karam kar dena, Bande hain tere hum sab hi, aapas ke gireh mita dena...............
Thank you very much, Md. Asim ji, for your words of appreciation and for your value addition to the poem with a brilliant couplet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what a beauty of Hindustani language has! Kya khoob! I loved to read this beautiful poem. Sir, please give your view about my new poems: 'resurrection of donne' and 'my lilac tree'.
Thanks for your kind words of appreciation. I'd surely like to read your poems.