बेशक़ (Hindi) Poem by Rajnish Manga

बेशक़ (Hindi)

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बेशक हमारे सर पे टिका आसमान था
लेकिन हमारे पांव के नीचे ज़मीं न थी
खाने को आटा दाल व रोटी मुहाल थी
वगरना ज़िंदगी में भी कोई कमीं न थी

(वगरना = वरना)

Sunday, October 16, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: earth,food,home,hunger,sky
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 16 October 2016

बहुत बढ़िया....आपने एक पुराने गीत की याद करवा दी चीनो अरब हमारा हिंदुस्तान हमारा, रहने को घर नहीं है सारा जहाँ हमारा ....तालीम है अधूरी, मिलती नहीं मजूरी, मालूम क्या किसीको, दर्द इ निहां हमारा चीनओ अरब हमारा..................धन्यवाद - राजनीशजी....

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Rajnish Manga 16 October 2016

कविता की सुंदर समीक्षा प्रस्तुत करने के लिये और एक सारगर्भित गीत याद दिलाने का शुक्रिया, आसिम जी.

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Kezia Kezia 30 April 2017

very nicely articulated sir.

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Rajnish Manga 30 April 2017

Thank you so much for appreciating the poem (बेशक़) .

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2016

खाने को आटा दाल व रोटी मुहाल थी वगरना अपने घर में कोई कमीं न थी..... well done sir' great meaningful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 21 October 2016

Thanks for appreciating this four liner poem, Kumarmani ji.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 October 2016

खाने को आटा दाल व रोटी मुहाल थी वगरना अपने घर में कोई कमीं न थी..... well done sir' great meaningful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2016

An impressive painting of poverty, very well penned.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2016

Old is gold memory. This memory takes us back to far long time. At that time joint families were there and all were happy helping each other and family was considered as heaven. Plenty of food materials were gifted by Earth and these were preserved and served as done today. Interesting sharing! ..10

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Rajnish Manga 20 October 2016

Most thoughtful and analytical critique on the poem. Thank you so much, Kumarmani ji.

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