Even though it seems to take forever,
forever inside. To let the pain surrender,
surrender and fly. Into the thunder, into
the night. Into the ocean waves so tender.
That wash away, salty tears from sight.
Under the stark, of the moons light.
Some pain takes a long time to ease just a little but even so God is there to comfort us if we just reach out in prayer and listen. Well done, my friend.There is a deep soothing sensation after reading this which testifies to the rhythm and word choice in the piece. 10+++
Thank You! ! ! Dear Susan, For Such Kind Beautiful And Heartfelt Reply! ! ! ! ! And I 'am Glad To Hear It Has A Soothing Feel :) ! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Paints Such Beauty Of Life And Heart Deep! ! ! ! ! With Such Spirit And Feel Within, That To A Soul Does Reach! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! My Friend :) Ever So Many Smiles! ! ! ! ! :) And Blessings! ! ! ! ! :)
While we surrender in God he takes out our pain. God is great to save us from all sufferings and danger. We feel calmness under the stark of moon light. This poem has very deep insight and this is beautifully penned...10
Thank You! ! ! Kumarmani, For Such An Ever So Beautiful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry With Ever Such Beauty Flows! ! ! ! ! That Touches Heart Like A River In The Sun Setting Gold! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !
Thank You! ! ! Bernard, For Your Beautiful And Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poetry Ever So Beautifully Holds, Such Depth, Heart, Beauty And Soul! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem.It creates a fascinating atmosphere!
Thank You! ! ! For Such A Kind Reply! ! ! ! ! I Look Forward To Visiting Your Poetry Page! ! ! ! ! Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings And Smiles! ! ! ! !