His Heatwave Poem by Susan Lacovara

His Heatwave

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Fool was I to think you were the sun
For that blazing moment of beauty
Come undone...

If I had worn my shades
Maybe you wouldn't have noticed
The folly in my eyes...
And how, now, it dies

Had your warmth not been scorching
Setting my skin to fire
I could've walked away unscathed
Lines seemingly rehearsed, replayed...

Fool was I to think you were the sun
Looming and luring me into states of undress
Sweating in the sweetness of your stare
Both my spirit and my soul, left upon the chair

I found winter, last, so merciless
But this...in summer, in sudden surrender
Fool was I to think you were the sun
Come undone....

Wednesday, July 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(07/02/14) blinded, by the sun I sought...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darlene Walsh 06 July 2014

To be undone by someone bright as the sun, maybe the fool for a moment but never surrender.

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Richard Beevor 06 July 2014

No fool could write so well, lovely work Susan

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Chuy Amante 02 July 2014

Sweating in the sweetness of your stare... Wow! I'd leave the chair! Nice!

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