Hit The Floor Poem by orion tudor

Hit The Floor

Rating: 5.0


Flickering light
Fading life
Gathering dark
Growing dread
Screaming within
Scratching without
Ebbing luck
Ending life.

Darkness surrounds
Pain deep inside
Eurupting out
A river of life,
Runing away,
Leaving behind,
Taking the pain
Leaving cold
Numb and fear
Removing all doubt
Draining all life.

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Carrol Hoffman 12 May 2008

wow that was a great poem i love it

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