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Hold me close and don't let go;
I'm so scared to be alone.
I've been by myself for too long,
And always had to be strong.
Now I only want to rest;
And lay my head on your chest.
Hold me close and don't let go;
These wars I fight no one knows.
Now whisper how you love me,
Say it tender and softly.
I am weary and soon will sleep,
But with you no longer will I weep.
So hold me close and don't let go,
For I never want to be alone.
Krystal Brown
Hammy Brown
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Comments about this poem (Hold me close
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Hammy Brown
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Little Hatila ;) (2/13/2009 5:54:00 PM)
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wow, very beautiful poem, of needing someone so desperately...loved every word of it....
well done...10
Hataw
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Yoonoos Peerbocus (11/1/2008 7:02:00 AM)
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a fine monologue imloring to be embraced for good...loneliness is csaring. deep feeling expressed all through. well done
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