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~ HOLY MILK ~

~ HOLY MILK ~
Ms. Nivedita
UK
16 February 2010.

Cyclic weeping
Overdue
Love flowething
Thro’ virgin breast
O’ Holy Milk
Who made it happen
Fracturing fragrance of trust?

O’ Fille
Punishment of
Dwarfing forgiveness
Give why?

O’ breast feel jamboree
Nip inertia embarrassment.

From gentled breast
Deliver deathless lovehope
Share him hear
Vouched euphonic motherhood
Spilling relentlessly! Ooohing!

Mete mansion for
Beau’s face
In sousing tear
Assign you dear
Unborn to honor
As riches from love
Not lurid lust.

‘Tis Sanctifier.

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Submitted: Tuesday, February 16, 2010
Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010


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  • Chanda Nsofu (11/4/2011 5:48:00 AM)

    Love from the breasts perspective.

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  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (12/10/2010 8:33:00 AM)

    A poem full of symbols, though too much abstraction is there still poem is good.

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  • Shihabudheen K J (12/7/2010 12:34:00 AM)

    Virgin breast is a symbol of chastity endowed with adorable women reflecting unimaginable flow of fathomless purity.ie her holy milk.great poem. Great poet, please feel to read any one of my poem and comment like 'children of iraq'.

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  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (7/30/2010 11:11:00 AM)

    A thought provoking read. Symbollic of the purity of womanhood and motherhood.
    Deep content, well expressed.; D

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  • Dwi Utami (7/16/2010 4:49:00 AM)

    wow virgin breast!
    Holy milk when I'know the taste this milk? I'never drink holy milk.just i'know a ''manna''bread from heaven, great poem of you: thumb: : thumb:

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (6/29/2010 5:47:00 AM)

    oh goodie... yup... it is a thoughtful and thought-provoking piece... written by a true poet

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  • Siddartha Montik (6/7/2010 11:44:00 AM)

    nice one Nivedita! ! Liked it much! ! give a 10 +

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  • Amrit Rathi (5/28/2010 11:08:00 AM)

    Glorious expression of Motherhood....Cyclic weeping//Love flowering//Fracturing trust...still //forgiveness...Your style and use of words is unparalleled, no wonder you get so many poets to eager to savor its fragrance and comment. Thanks.

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  • Marieta Maglas (5/25/2010 2:17:00 PM)

    Thoughtful, and thought-provoking piece.Thank you for sharing...Mari

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  • Sayantan Dutta (5/21/2010 3:09:00 PM)

    Breast is the symbol of womanhood and most importantly, motherhood. This particular poem goes beyond the profanity of lust and despite prolific usage of symbolism, remains exquisite in taste and expression...alabaster!

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