(dedicated to Mr. Sulaiman Mohd Yusof, my best friend at PH)
painted brown
wooden ground
square window
roofs so low
breezy surround
look like alone
the teak door
near to shore
cute garden
almost silent
gorgeously roses
humbly butterflies
my soul in you
my will follow you
my heart with you
my mind inside you
I bring memory of you
when I visit abroad
I bring fragrance of you
when I travel around
you always call me
wherever I trip far
you always invite me
whenever I sojourn
melody of your bricks
harmony of your glasses
rhythm of your environment
singing into my deepest heart
(inspired by Motley Crue's home sweet home)
AGAIN, AS WITH ALMOST EVERY SINGLE POEM OF YOURS, THIS IS GREAT. YOU TURN EVERYTHING INTO LIFE AND MAKE LIFE MORE BEAUTIFUL IN DOING SO. YOU ARE MAGIC. MY BEST WISHES AND THANKS FLY YOUR WAY, CAROL
hey ahmad, this is a fantastic feat, inspired by the great dudes Motleys and dedicated to me.Deep from the bottom of my heart I salute you ahmad.keep on writing bro and make proud of your great nation 'SANG MERAH PUTIH'. ayuh maju terus bung!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful... thanks for sharing us ahmad. md