Home Poem by Sophia White

Home



Through two doors.
Rows of books.
Swinging door.
Eleven to pause.
Eleven to top.
At double doors
Pause and stop
Turn off phone.
Then go in.
Going home
Through double doors.
I’m home again
On upper floor.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Landrey 22 February 2007

nice, I like it. especially the pause part, I could feel my legs doing that. for me I would have put something like 'i take them one,4 of two, pause, one,4 of two' cuz' that's how I run up. -landrey

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R. S. Farris 16 February 2007

YES....sincere emphathy.

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