John Thorkild Ellison

Rookie - 113 Points (17/04/51 / Edinburgh)

Hook, Line, And Sinker - Poem by John Thorkild Ellison

I've measured my life out with Buddy Holly tunes
And pints of beer, and even coffee spoons,
I've prayed somebody would return my love,
I've prayed to the Devil Himself, and to the Lord Above!

Whatever you think it's a bloody shame
That the woman I love says I'm to blame
For the feelings I have, because I had no choice,
I was simply bewitched by the sound of her voice.

I've tricked myself into hoping for more
But it's just a charade and I know the real score,
I know that I'm just an acceptable friend,
My love's not wanted and that is the end.

It isn't easy to see and not to touch,
To restrain your behaviour when you feel so much,
But I guess there's nothing else I can do,
I'm completely besotted and hooked on you! !


Comments about Hook, Line, And Sinker by John Thorkild Ellison

  • Gold Star - 36,896 Points Gajanan Mishra (3/1/2013 6:49:00 AM)

    Nothing else I can do. thanks O my dear poet. But we can pray we can write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 1, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, March 1, 2013


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