John Thorkild Ellison

Rookie - 113 Points (17/04/51 / Edinburgh)

An Alien's Valentine - Poem by John Thorkild Ellison

Come be my Valentine
And make me dance with joy;
I'll give you babies, one, two, three,
A girl, an alien, and a boy.

Don't be so very nervous!
Relax, unwind, be cool!
With an IQ like an asteroid
I'm hardly your average fool.

You may think me presumptuous
But I haven't yet begun,
My astronomical fantasies
Are sexy and they're fun.

So be my Valentine
And make me dance with joy,
The stars are advantageous,
Come on now, don't be coy!

Comments about An Alien's Valentine by John Thorkild Ellison

  • Rookie David Desantis (5/15/2008 10:00:00 AM)

    haha cool man. Very fun as greenwolf said...the rhyme scheme was also excellent, and I love how you fit in the baby alien mention...slightly quirky as i think all good poetry should be lol 10/10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (2/23/2008 12:02:00 PM)

    Well done, my man. Fun, the way poetry should be.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chuck Audette (10/6/2006 12:22:00 PM)

    Would that be an illegal or legal alien? Very fun! - chuck (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Esther Leclerc (10/6/2006 12:09:00 PM)

    Mondo-bizarro fun, John! Let's see whatcha got for Halloween! ! ! Esther : ] (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Preeti - is here! (7/27/2006 3:16:00 AM)

    That was quite interesting!

    Preets (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Moya Levy (1/9/2006 9:42:00 AM)

    I'm enjoying reading your poems John, this one especially! ! Moyaxx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 25, 2010

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