Hope Poem by Micheal Mixon

Hope



hope is a fickle thing
sets you up and kills your dreams
gets inside and rots your core
you have only a little yet you want more

hope is a fickle thing
hopes are up then dashed away
sit there and wish that they would stay
you never knew they would make you pay

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you never knew they would make you pay, , , , , beautifully written. they will make u to pay sometimes. exactly is the happening....... well done good write.....10 read mine hope against hope.. u willfine it interestinga nd confriming ur views too

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

The negative side of the hope is described well. Interesting poem,10+

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Maddy Macleod 27 May 2009

awesome poem. rhyme is a difficult thing to use and keep the rhyme from taking control of the poem. really good job.

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