hope is a fickle thing
sets you up and kills your dreams
gets inside and rots your core
you have only a little yet you want more
hope is a fickle thing
hopes are up then dashed away
sit there and wish that they would stay
you never knew they would make you pay
The negative side of the hope is described well. Interesting poem,10+
awesome poem. rhyme is a difficult thing to use and keep the rhyme from taking control of the poem. really good job.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
you never knew they would make you pay, , , , , beautifully written. they will make u to pay sometimes. exactly is the happening....... well done good write.....10 read mine hope against hope.. u willfine it interestinga nd confriming ur views too