Hot Poem by Kathlyn Grace

Hot

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Heat in the moment
of this type of forever
where the sounds in the night
seem to fit in just fine
with the heat on my breath
and the heat of your touch
the same one im draming of
and the burning passion
of a too young stranger
meets the burning
of that too wise man
the feelings seer the skin
as they meet in temature
turning the sun
into a jelous pluto
as the two breath the same words
at the same time
at the same forever moment
and thats when the heat of the moment
freezes
breaks
and the shards dissapear in the once heated moment
and everything falls
and the sun smirks
and the moments lose their magic
just as the heat burns it's self up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Ilnicki 22 July 2009

Sounds rather 'hot' I like the intensity of this poem and the dp\epth of emotion.

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