Humming Of The Wind Poem by girlie lactao

Humming Of The Wind

Rating: 5.0


Like a car that recklessly blasts its way
Through a busy and crowded street
The humming of the wind seems
Not soothing nor cooling but rather scary.

Closing doors and windows
Hiding from the unusual scene
Anxieties and worries are high
How long does the humming stay?

But it is just the wind; it passes by
Let nature pass and do its thing
Everything will come still again
A confirmation that peace reigns.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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