Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Rookie - 7 Points (Bahraich, U.P. India)

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I am Mohd. Akmal Nazir. I am the resident of mohalla Quazipura, Bahraich. I am the eldest son of my parents. My father late Mr. Mohd. Nazir Khan was a teacher in a local interermediate college. My mother Mrs. Shahida Begum is a house wife. I have two younger brothers(Athar Nazir and Arshad Nazir) and two younger sisters(Mrs. Rehana Salman and Irfana) . My brother-in-law Salman Ali ... more »

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  • Nick Krakana (7/17/2011 9:39:00 AM)

    Like this, simple and true, always rings through......NK

  • Alex 'The Poet' (A.T.P.) Lushaba (6/23/2011 7:41:00 AM)

    Well said poet..Great words....You know I rated it 9 because I was eager to get just one last sentence, but you denied(smiling) ..great my poet...I love it so much... I have already taken it for a frame in my room with the last part saying ' By: Mohd. Akmal Nazir....'

  • Chris Darlington (6/23/2011 3:42:00 AM)

    some strong stuff in these poems

  • Linda Patino (6/21/2011 11:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem..I loved it. I will gladly read more of your poems..Thank you for your nice comment on mine.

  • Deejay Manaleng (6/13/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    A humble complaint indeed it is....11 out of 10 love the 'thorns on my lips'

  • Hribhu Dey (6/12/2011 9:04:00 AM)

    Varied subjects come to be foregrounded...personal experiences graduate into acquiring a universal value...luv reading your poem.

  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/6/2011 1:46:00 AM)

    Audrey Heller (Miami United States; Female; 79)
     To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir
     Date Time: 4/2/2011 7: 57: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
     Subject: My Poems
    Thank you, so very much for you wonderful critiques. I'm very pleased indeed, in how you feel about my work. I did go and read, several of your new poems and I must say, you too, do a great job. We write differently, but you're very deep! I thank you, for sharing your work with me and I hope you'll continue toread mine, whenever you can!
    Audrey Heller

  • Denvor Fernandez (6/4/2011 9:42:00 AM)

    Interesting poems always come as a stream of thoughts

  • inayr (6/1/2011 6:39:00 AM)

    Very good, mohd, i gave it 10
    wanting a word of kindness but recieving cold harshness

  • Vana22 Mashelkar (5/15/2011 2:58:00 AM)

    gosh your poem revives all the feelings...
    too expressive! ! !
    thanks for rating mine 10
    10 to u toooo

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Best Poem of Mohammad Akmal Nazir

*a Song Of Sorrow*

I write and remove thy name,
In this way I punish my heart,
Thy love was nothing but a game,
And I was defeated by thy ways smart.

I am still alive leading a life of curse,
My vivacity departs, my light is fading,
No one is here to find me a nurse,
And yet my peace thy memory is invading,

O soul, o life, be ready for something worst,
Something thy would never have seen,
My death will soon quench thy thirst,
Thou may get what I mean.

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