Hunger Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Hunger

Rating: 5.0


Ah,
How
Hunger
Hits

With
Its fists
On
My tummy

That
Calls out
Helplessly
For
Food.

My Face
Was
Covered

With
The veil
Of
Craving.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 06 July 2010

Hunger stretches a multidimensional metaphor. Face is always covered, but the desire burns the whole entity behind the veil. Beautiful, excellent and superb. The real picture of hungry generation. Hunger is the word, carries the meaning of substituting the earth. Hunger but stay behind the veil, don't expose it. Third-world embargo. Never try to expose. First the rebellion, second the question of chastity. Thank you very much. A well-written logical poem. Rather the anti-poetry. Well-done. Regards, 10++ Apoet Bangla

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