Hunger Poem by taylor harris

Hunger



hunger you see it all the time
in a childs hallow eyes or in a elders wrinkled skin
hunger most people move to fast to notice
but if you took the time and stoped you will notice that its all around

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is one of my first poems i have ever written so its not that great oh well.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 11 June 2012

Good idea! it is good to see some idea that rarely people talk about here..keep writing_Unwritten Soul

0 0 Reply
Alex Medina 09 May 2012

I agree with Robert. It's a great message. Sometimes the mechanics of a poem doesn't matter. If it's from the heart (Or a good message) it's a good poem. Besides keep trying. You'll get better eventually. We all start somewhere.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
taylor harris

taylor harris

los lunas nm
Close
Error Success