Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 175 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

Hurry up, I am on a way to heaven


hey girl, whom are you waiting for endlessly,
am i not proving alone to satisfy your curiosity,
just give me a chance and make me a man,
everything would belong to us then.

and dear little young mermaid
are you coming in the gown red
that will add up to your beauty
and slighty put some fire on my curiosity,
you are the talk of my unnamed village,
are you feeling comfertable with my age.

i may be young but too have a song
that with your fat heart does it belong
i rather enchant malacholey strain
for my darling to put off her pain

do you even wonder why wonders are only seven,
hurry up! I am on a way to heaven.

Submitted: Friday, June 14, 2013
Edited: Saturday, June 15, 2013

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  • Rookie - 807 Points Thomas A Robinson (6/15/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Your poems come with an urgency, you must paint your poems one glorious stroke at a time
    making your words become vibrant images, searing pain , unforgetable love. Make your readers demand much more. (Report) Reply

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