Vishal Sharma

Gold Star - 5,269 Points (10th July 1995/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

Hurry Up, I Am On A Way To Heaven - Poem by Vishal Sharma

hey girl, whom are you waiting for endlessly,
am i not proving alone to satisfy your curiosity,
just give me a chance and make me a man,
everything would belong to us then.

and dear little young mermaid
are you coming in the gown red
that will add up to your beauty
and slighty put some fire on my curiosity,
you are the talk of my unnamed village,
are you feeling comfertable with my age.

i may be young but too have a song
that with your fat heart does it belong
i rather enchant malacholey strain
for my darling to put off her pain

do you even wonder why wonders are only seven,
hurry up! I am on a way to heaven.

Comments about Hurry Up, I Am On A Way To Heaven by Vishal Sharma

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (6/18/2013 12:18:00 AM)

    You and your poems really sound heavenly. Kudos...._ Rosia (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Survi Sharma (6/16/2013 3:15:00 PM)

    what a life in that heaven
    i wonder (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (6/15/2013 8:46:00 AM)

    Your poems come with an urgency, you must paint your poems one glorious stroke at a time
    making your words become vibrant images, searing pain , unforgetable love. Make your readers demand much more. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,512 Points Unwritten Soul (6/14/2013 1:18:00 PM)

    Awesome, you did a mature poem with nice detail here! _Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 15, 2013

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