Sara Bergamini

Rookie (Italy, Forli)

Hurts - Poem by Sara Bergamini

It hurts every time you pass by and don't say hi
Every time you pass by and don't look into my eyes
I would do anything to get a second chance
Just to get to hold once more your hand

Comments about Hurts by Sara Bergamini

  • Rookie Sarah Muna (9/10/2011 7:44:00 AM)

    I know it needs more and I can make it longer but in that moment that's all I felt (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,979 Points Luis Estable (9/10/2011 7:39:00 AM)

    Perhaps this poem, this brief poem is in need of a bit more. As it is, you have not done that bad, but I would have like a bit more to come a bit more around the subject; other than that a quick and sweet piece in spite a the little pain felt be the speaker.

    Take care now (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 118 Points Ebi Robert (9/10/2011 7:10:00 AM)

    short and interesting. Keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 10, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 7, 2011

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