Sara Bergamini

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Hurts


It hurts every time you pass by and don't say hi
Every time you pass by and don't look into my eyes
I would do anything to get a second chance
Just to get to hold once more your hand

Submitted: Saturday, September 10, 2011
Edited: Friday, October 07, 2011

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Comments about this poem (Hurts by Sara Bergamini )

  • Rookie Sarah Muna (9/10/2011 7:44:00 AM)

    I know it needs more and I can make it longer but in that moment that's all I felt (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,322 Points Luis Estable (9/10/2011 7:39:00 AM)

    Perhaps this poem, this brief poem is in need of a bit more. As it is, you have not done that bad, but I would have like a bit more to come a bit more around the subject; other than that a quick and sweet piece in spite a the little pain felt be the speaker.

    Take care now (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 28 Points Ebi Robert (9/10/2011 7:10:00 AM)

    short and interesting. Keep it up (Report) Reply

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