Vishal Sharma

Rookie - 184 Points (10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

**i Am A Solid Insoluble Insane** - Poem by Vishal Sharma

Do you all know my deeds?
yeah, perhaps but you all know my name,
do you know I am insane, solid and insoluble,
great! Now listen to me and judge then,
do you think I am a fool talented
the one who is always floating in words,
yes, I am, I am so, and a very rude genius,
I love someone, by heart but madly, a sin?
do you rather think me a child, think me insane,
I have guts, they are terrible and rude,
I want water over my fire, broke out into my heart,
and really, the secret chamber burned, made me insane
and I think, my world is a cage with a parrot,
and with whom I can talk to enchant strains.
my luck is dull and dirty and gives rather pain
that has made me a solid insoluble insane.


Comments about **i Am A Solid Insoluble Insane** by Vishal Sharma

  • Rookie Tabandeh Heidary Bafghy (6/26/2013 11:39:00 AM)

    hi my friend
    nice, very nice
    i enjoyed it
    good luck (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,353 Points Unwritten Soul (6/26/2013 9:21:00 AM)

    You know, to harvest gold we need to get dirty places, and dirt on your shirts..so if you are the gold, be the polish one, maybe you are from bad place but you can change it to be better one...so what what you have now, do something that you can make something more, if you can do a little create something bigger...young is your time, so lot of chances you will earn...thus, never look back just go and do the best as you can...and humble is the best :) _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 187 Points Jenie Franksay (6/26/2013 2:07:00 AM)

    ummm... its good...
    but you write much better than this.
    not your best but good. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,468 Points Bri Edwards (6/26/2013 12:14:00 AM)

    i was requested to read the poet's 3 latest poems, but he did not say which are the three latest, so i just start at the top of the list. yes, insane perhaps. perhaps not? i DON'T say well spoken as the last person did, as i don't understand the poem after one reading which is all the time i have for it. but thanks, i think, for sharing anyway. i THINK i would write some lines differently such as the line: and with whom I can talk to enchant strains. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Kelley (6/25/2013 7:29:00 PM)

    well spoken! very well spoken (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (6/25/2013 6:42:00 PM)

    Old saying, ''Mad men do rant ''. so you are an insoluble solid that is insane.
    Potassium is an insoluble solid in kerosene but throw it into water and it explodes.
    Which are you? The stable insoluble solid or the explosive insane poet.
    I kind of hope both... there are two sides to everything and a poet knoweth. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 24, 2013


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