i am not a ball
don't kick me..
i am not a fish
don't catch me..
i am not a bird
don't shoot me..
i am not a dolphin
don't pamper me..
i am not a soap
don't wash me..
i am not a cigarette
don't smoke me..
i am not a lipstick
don't wear me..
i am not a car
don't drive me..
i am not a riddle
don't solve me..
i am not a poem
don't read me..
i am a silly thought, so ignore me..
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haha 'I am not a comment, dont notice me.' okay you really have a quirky way of expressing yourself. really interesting
Wow! This is brilliant! And I love the title! Of course I have to click on something that says '-don't read me'! lol I love the style of 'I am not/ don't'. It flows so well and you got really creative with it. I love it!
deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep! ! ! that s all!
I am not a critic don't ask me. Heehee could not resist I like it lots it's good to smile and It made me do that.10
i like it alot........great one and diffrenet but in a good way ;)
I liked the focus and brevity of the lines. The pace of the poem is great and maintained even though the images shift. I always drawn to economy of thought and line, though it's easy even in my own work to 'wander' about with thought unintentionally. Looking forward to reading more of your work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem is cute.But is their a hidden message in between the lines.........9