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Haadia Ansari


I am poem


I am rolling in he deep
I wonder when i will stop rolling with everyone else
I hear people saying bad things about me it makes me feel that i should kepp rolling intil i am depp in sorrow
I see everyone still while i am rolling all around
I want to stop rolling in deep sorrow
I am rolling in the deep
I pretend to be like everyone else not rolling in deep regret but still, still as life can be
I feel in deep sorrow rolling in the worst thoughts
I worry about someone finding out about my deepest darkest secrets
I cry when i can not stop rolling in deep sorrow
I am roliing in the deep
I undersyand that one day i will stop rolling in the deep regret
I i say that no one should be rolling in deeo sorrow but still
I dream that i am still that none of those deep thoughts have ever accured
I try to stop the rolling but the rolling is going to the deepest regret the rolling has taken over
I hope one day one minute one moment oone second one hor i willl stop rolling
I an rolling in the deep

Submitted: Tuesday, February 14, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, February 15, 2012

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  • Haadia Ansari (2/15/2012 9:20:00 PM)

    Thxs Romeo this was a school project and now we have to make a picture any ideas anyone and is this a corney idea a background black and grey with my poem and then a candle new with a flame then melts (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (2/15/2012 5:04:00 PM)

    You rightfully identifying yourself with deep and poignant feelings! Soon you will be rolling your own thoughts in your distinct way for your poetic talent is very obvious in this well penned write! 10+++ Keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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