Chelsea Pieterse

Rookie (1 October 1992 / Johanesburg)

I Am The Broken Promise - Poem by Chelsea Pieterse

I am the Broken promise
Of eternal life
I am your torture
I am your strife
I am the shattered promise
Of eternal bliss
I am your greif
I am the one you will not miss
I am the ripped promise
I am depressions meth
I am your loathing fear
Yes, i am death


Comments about I Am The Broken Promise by Chelsea Pieterse

  • Rookie Raynette Eitel (6/17/2008 9:25:00 AM)

    Oh, this one is brutal...good use of the rhymes.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 13, 2008



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