Treasure Island

Priyanka Shetty

(13-03-1985 / India)

I can't understand myself.....


I don't care if a hundred eyes look at me,
I wish those two eyes would admire me.

When the day is going great,
I wish that special someone was with me.

When anyone showers me with compliments or sweet words,
I wish that those words were his instead.

A very unknown feeling,
of missing someone when that person is in front of you....

Of a feeling of hope,
Even when life is fun.....

Like a dropp of tear,
in a happy moment.

It's not that i can't live without you,
It's just that I don't want to......

Submitted: Saturday, June 28, 2008
Edited: Saturday, June 28, 2008

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  • Tori Haynes (7/7/2008 1:04:00 PM)

    This is a good poem.... sometimes I just feel that no one loves me. Keep writing your poems, I like it very much (Report) Reply

  • Vidyadhara ..... (6/29/2008 7:32:00 AM)

    Everyone can live to themselves.But we need the dear ones to share and cherish the dreams.good write. (Report) Reply

  • Aswathi Nair K (6/29/2008 7:13:00 AM)

    thanks a lot for sharing what each of us feel..........everyone has this feeling in his/her heart... u've had the courage to speak it out....

    keep it up.....(i know i'm none to say that)

    best wishes... (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (6/29/2008 2:11:00 AM)

    a feeling known to many of us! good one it is...it must be...write more on your feel, priyanka! (Report) Reply

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