I Could Be Out In The Rain Poem by Vigna Mukund

I Could Be Out In The Rain

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I could be out in the rain
Dancing with the drops, laughing with the leaves
Drenching with the grass, soaking with the trees
But I am here, watching
A bag on my shoulder, a book in my hand.

I could be that tree, its warm brown against bright green
Ridges and wood, old and new
Rain water trickling straying filling, so pure and clean
Both reunite in the like leaves and dew.

I could be that grass, million strands all synchronized
Waving and dancing to the breeze
Not one betraying the other, beautifully linked
Drenching in the rain, moving with ease

I could be that floor, hard and concrete
Letting the pitter-patter fall on its back
And erase the dust, let off the heat.
So much relief from a drop clear and black!

I could be that hideous caterpillar
With no choice but to remain in the shower
None to stop it, none to judge it and
Can be as long as in the rain and longer

I am not a tree, I am not grass
I am not floor, nor a caterpillar
Just a human, with a bag and a book
While these are showered with the elixir.

Monday, September 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A time of drought, a time of dry land, and one drop of water from the sky transforms to a full-fledged shower. What did I do? I had a bag on my shoulder and a book in my hand, and watched the show. Felt a desperate need to put down my feelings, and here it is.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 03 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Vigna. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 18 September 2014

A Highly imaginative piece of poetry. Very well articulated and nicely penned. I love it. Thanks for sharing.

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