Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 309 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'I Don't Know! '


I don't know about today.

I wake and wake to today.
I wake and wake to today.

I shake and shake til I quake.

I don't know about today.

I know not how many days.
I know not how many days.

I don't know about today.

I shake and quake in the days wake.

I don't know if I'll partake.

I don't know!
I don't know!

I don't know about today.

I don't know!

Submitted: Thursday, March 13, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 14, 2014

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was cold and my allergies were showing signs of flaring up. Besides that I was making stuff up. Please comment at will and with honesty!

Comments about this poem ('I Don't Know! ' by Shania K. Younce )

  • Veteran Poet - 3,198 Points Rajesh Thankappan (8/25/2014 7:58:00 PM)

    Every day is a mystery that may throw up surprises on its bents and curves. Though a certain circumstance may have prompted you to pen this poem, yet it holds good for all 365 days of the year. A good write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Delicate Heart (7/10/2014 9:52:00 PM)

    eye-catchy title. one would first think that ur kinda hesitant being unable to declare ur true love emotions towards someone though it is a lovely and touchy poem. love it......... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points Beach Girl (3/25/2014 6:48:00 AM)

    I must admit, I was a bit concerned for you as I read this poem. I was relieved to read the 'poet's notes'. Thank goodness, it was only allergies. You expressed your feelings very earnestly as a true poet should! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,554 Points Dinesh Nair (3/19/2014 5:57:00 AM)

    You have written from your heart. Care has to be taken in spelling and alliteration of better diction is expected. Wish you all the best ahead. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,905 Points Soulful Heart (3/19/2014 1:54:00 AM)

    song of the day........simple and very true.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,239 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (3/18/2014 4:22:00 AM)

    beautiful poem more like a song made out of adversity. (Report) Reply

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