I don't know about today.
I wake and wake to today.
I wake and wake to today.
I shake and shake til I quake.
I don't know about today.
I know not how many days.
I know not how many days.
I don't know about today.
I shake and quake in the days wake.
I don't know if I'll partake.
I don't know!
I don't know!
I don't know about today.
I don't know!
You have written from your heart. Care has to be taken in spelling and alliteration of better diction is expected. Wish you all the best ahead.
I don't know about today. I don't know! very fine and sensitive to your feelings and you are very honest in writing all that you feel.. thank u very much. dear poetess. tony
We are almost unconscious about our life but it will attain super entity when our consciouness is awaken. A very powerful and delightful write.
Every day is a mystery that may throw up surprises on its bents and curves. Though a certain circumstance may have prompted you to pen this poem, yet it holds good for all 365 days of the year. A good write.
eye-catchy title. one would first think that ur kinda hesitant being unable to declare ur true love emotions towards someone though it is a lovely and touchy poem. love it.........
I must admit, I was a bit concerned for you as I read this poem. I was relieved to read the 'poet's notes'. Thank goodness, it was only allergies. You expressed your feelings very earnestly as a true poet should!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful poem more like a song made out of adversity.