I Fell In Love Poem by Veronika Bitkina

I Fell In Love

Rating: 5.0


His name is Jake. I fell in love.
I met him on a train.
His golden eyes - beyond above,
His hair like flour from grain.
He is so spoiled, and young insane,
His girlfriend hot like stove..
I went away. He had to stay
A dog, who looks like wolf.

Wednesday, July 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dog,girlfriend,love,train,wolf
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dedicated to the girl and her awesome dog
that I met on the train to Vetrolles...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 11 August 2018

He is so spoiled, and young insane, His girlfriend hot like stove.. I went away. a good poem, the dog and the girl.. and your powerful words very expressive.. tony

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Mj Lemon 09 July 2015

Very nicely done....The last three lines allow the work to be interpreted in at least several ways. A very fine poem.

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