I Hate This Song Because It Was Writtin For You Poem by Brooke JKJKJK

I Hate This Song Because It Was Writtin For You



heres that song i wrote for you just because you asked me to. for you id do most anything even though all we had was some fling. it hurts me now to look back on what we had and what we lacked. from this day forward the lights are on so i can see i was just a pawn. so now you see my hearts not broken to you i was only a token. a token to put in your bank. now you have another on your flank. so once again heres your song and yes i know its not too long. well thats because i have no feeling cuz my heart you just weren't stealing. its still mine at least for now so you can finally take your bow.

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Kacey Hauck 07 July 2009

i like this poem. alot(: its very expressive and has a generally nice flow. some words just seem a bit off and sometimes we tend to put in words that we could leave out. but seriously. nice work(: ~~Kacey! (:

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