I Have Learnt To Live Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

I Have Learnt To Live

Rating: 4.3


it took late a bit.
from whom it
doesnt matter much.

now i know,
what is happiness & sorrow.
both are moments' guest,
neither they stop nor rest.

life is coloured by these two,
life smiles and frowns too.
that is it, that is it.
i have learnt to live late a bit.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sj Holland 24 June 2013

I like the smart, clever way you arranged your phrases, and how they all work together to make one point. You kept to your subject very well. And it's about a great life lesson.

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Survi Sharma 24 June 2013

short and sweet charming and delightful enjoyable

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Yasmin Khan 25 June 2013

wisdom and understanding speak here in theses nicely penned lines.

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Unwritten Soul 25 June 2013

Its not too late...as we have more time to live, we never too late to learn as everyday lesson may repeat the previous one, yesterday or long before...i like this spirit in you..keep it up_Soul

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Vishal Sharma 25 June 2013

nostalgia please write some happy words

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Dr Antony Theodore 17 November 2018

life is coloured by these two, life smiles and frowns too. that is it, that is it. i have learnt to live late a bit. happiness and sorrow....... learning lessons by living...... thank u dear poetess. tony

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Shania K. Younce 05 October 2013

I do declare it is quite fine.

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Heather Wilkins 12 July 2013

we all must learn the joys and sorrows of life. We are not promised a rose garden. there will always be thorns in our path. nice write

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 07 July 2013

Nicely written poem, enjoyed it. Siya_! !

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Ambrosia A 26 June 2013

Time will teach and heals everything. loved reading thro' those phrases. Good write, keep it up.

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