Sorry & Thank You Poem by JENIE FRANKSAY

Sorry & Thank You

Rating: 3.8


sorry
that i gave lovely glances
to you everyday.
sorry
that i talked to you
in a nice way.
sorry
i am responsible for your
misunderstanding.
sorry
i gave you pain,
your longing went in vain.

thankyou
for being helpful
in every circumstance.
thankyou
for valueing my glance.
not valued by others though.
thankyou
for bearing my rudeness
which have hurt you.
thankyou
for revenge you took,
by not giving me even a last look.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Don Nguyen 25 June 2013

The person you wrote seem s like a sweet man who really cares for you. I dont think it was a revenge, his last look on you probably had pieved his heart as well. I hope Revenge is simply poetic expression and you didnt mean it. Your poem sounds so sweet and loving though, I love it.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 25 June 2013

Heartfelt poem Jenie, enjoyed reading... Siya_! !

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Vishal Sharma 25 June 2013

i knw each and every line created here great

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Survi Sharma 25 June 2013

nice poem and gud to see your poems daily

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hi jenie very beautiful thanks for your nice feeling good luck

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Chinedu Dike 16 June 2018

Well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing Jenie.

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Melikhaya Zagagana 26 August 2014

Thanks for being honest you made me understand; a beautiful drop i like it, thanks jenie.

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The Moody Blue 03 July 2013

your'e a good poet, , keep on writing

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Khairul Ahsan 02 July 2013

Sorry and Thank You, the three beautiful words so nicely used. A very straight forward and touching poem. Very much liked the comments of Don Nguyen and quite agree with him.

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Unwritten Soul 28 June 2013

Thanks and Sorry are two words that we must use often, in this beautiful write i can say i give you claps..do write more_Soul

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