I have walked these roads,
As have the one before me,
Through rain of storm,
From cloud of sky,
Yet not one drop,
Did touch my skin,
Nor did one dance,
Upon my farrowed brow.
I have walked these streets,
As have the one before me,
Though lonesome and bare,
That none could share,
Yet not a frown shown,
Nor pain have felt,
Upon my weathered face,
O'er my hearts loving grace.
I have walked this path,
As have the one before me,
As sunny days shines,
Infinite strength I find,
Shades my every step,
Holding hand with mine,
Not one beat was missed,
Nor was left from my side..
A great write! BRAVO! 'Upon my farrowed brow.' I was expecting 'furrowed brow' but I like your choice bette.
The rhythm to this beats, the message is clear. You paint the picture well. It is enjoyable, too. t x
A closeness shared, wonderful expression Thankyou Geoff Love duncan X
amazing. i loved it. the second verse is so rich in feeling and wisdom. brilliant, G.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
GEOFF...This is a superior piece of literary verse, possibly your best work, thusfar. '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR