I Know, Kusum, you Are Not Good Poem by Sokal Roy

I Know, Kusum, you Are Not Good

Rating: 4.5


I know,
Kusum you are not good
The broken melody is frozen in the throat after swallowing the tears
You have filled your hand with the story in the bangle
Throw the arrow of perfect laughter in the space of words
That arrow is very painful!

Rose walks with the responsibility of the state between the eyebrows
The Pathpuran, which is frozen on the path, knows that
Now the cloudy sun, full of tears knows,
Kusum you are not good.

Like buying groceries,
Close your window to the vase of pain
Nowadays there are no more songs in the bathroom.
Instead, sit down to sort out your thoughts
The festivals seem unnecessary to you
Better a poor horse than no horse at all.
Maybe—
The old saying means a calendar of tears.

I know,
Kusum you are not good.

I Know, Kusum, 
you Are Not Good
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 23 December 2020

If love cannot reach the desired camp of heart if love cannot earn the depicted being of feelings, then the love feels not good, then the love lives not happy,

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Sokal Roy 05 January 2021

Thank You Bro

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 December 2020

Wow! What a wonderful poem!

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Sokal Roy 05 January 2021

Thanks : )

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 December 2020

I am still grappling with the new features on ph. Sorry for posting the comments in fragments.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 December 2020

A Full Five star for the poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 December 2020

Part 3: She withdraws into herself. There is no love lost between them. This state into which a marriage reduces, deteriorates is a serious situation and needs immediate repairs.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 December 2020

Part 3

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 December 2020

Wow! What a poem. The poet repeatedly states, "Kusum, you are not good", to state very forcefully that it is the Narrator who is not good. His acts, his omissions and commissions have caused ‘Kusum' (the word in most Indian languages mean ‘flower') total alienation from him. She withdraws into him

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