My point of view
I saw you at the shopping mall
When I saw you my heart speeded up so fast I could fall
Then you smiled and waved at me
I waved back but it can't possibly be
Your Perfect blonde hair
Oh you went there
You make me feel all dizzy inside
But there are prettier girls than me beside
His point of view
Eww I saw you in the mall
Don't stare at me again and hug me up to the wall
I smiled at your friend
Because I remember the summer with all the time that we did spend
Her luscious brown hair compared to your horrible flat mess
Even an ogre would look cuter in that dress
You make me scared inside
But one day I want your friend to be my bride
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The number of similar episodes happening around is not few and far between. Thanks for the note which clarifies the two juxtaposed points of view. I enjoyed reading the poem. You have good imagination and you are able to put your thoughts to words pretty well. Keep writing, you'll go a long way! My best wishes to you...