Vanessa Hernandez

Rookie (06-20-1994 / Bejing)

I'Ll Be That Friend. - Poem by Vanessa Hernandez

There you were looking sad.
Many people wanted to make you glad.
I decided to take a chance and try to make you laugh.

For the first time I saw you smile,
it was something great and wild.
I told you I'll be the friend you want to have.

I'll make you smile, laugh, and wipe you tears away,
Make the pain fade away, I'll never hurt you again.
And if there's something you want, I'll do

I promise to be that friend,
that will ride with you til' the end.
Someone you can conquer all your fears,
through the years.

I'll be that friend
Show you how to bend
Make you trust
Because I believe in us.


Comments about I'Ll Be That Friend. by Vanessa Hernandez

  • Rookie Vanessa Roman (8/17/2008 7:49:00 PM)

    I feel you on this. Everyone needs a friend like that.
    Love the poem and how you put it together to make it rhyme.
    Good Job ma. : : Vanessa: : (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Camila Dulce (8/13/2008 12:02:00 AM)

    wow it's very touchin really
    i love it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Bethany Buhl (8/12/2008 11:55:00 PM)

    I wish that I could be a friend like that. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jasmine Bazan (8/12/2008 10:53:00 PM)

    dude...omg! ! ! i love it :)
    lol : P (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 9, 2008



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