I' Ll Quit Poetry..... [my Poemhunter Connection; Other Members; A Little Long] Poem by Bri Edwards

I' Ll Quit Poetry..... [my Poemhunter Connection; Other Members; A Little Long]

Rating: 4.9


Sitting quietly in my too-fancy chair, I hear classical music now fill the air.
[It's a rare evening during which my wife and I don't a movie share.]
Now the music's stopped coming from down the hall; I did enjoy it.
I believe my wife's at her computer in the "office"; she, the music, did employ it

I've been sitting in the dark trying to think what to write,
and my mental list of possible subjects is a miserable sight.
I've already quit college, three wives, and snowy winters, BUT....
this poem's title refers to me quitting poetry WRITING; so WHAT!

Yes! I must insist that's a great plan.... I feel I now have to follow,
and it's a plan my readers must accept, though in pain they may wallow.
But be consoled, my fans. I don't think it will be a great hardship to swallow.
There are plenty of mine already written, so don't you think your lives will be hollow.

Of course I may miss the writing and may cheat once in a while,
but if I do I'll try to write with exceptional humor and/or exceptional style.
And if I get a special request for a poem with a subject you choose......
I'll try to not let you down, ...... or your sensibilities abuse.

[Hey, I've got other things in my life besides poetry to take up my time,
though I must confess that one of my favorite things to do..... is to make up a rhyme.]

I can now concentrate on submitting a backlog of poems, some good, some perhaps not.
Some you may praise, and some you may prefer to leave alone to just rot.
And we'll all have time to sample more works of OTHER PoemHunter members.....
whose poems have been ignored while MINE have warmed YOU.... like red-glowing embers.

There are some poets' names which I'd like to suggest,
but if they don't interest you, then look at the rest...
of the long-standing site members AND those new ones too.....
who..... I think will be glad to get comments from YOU!

Elena Plotkin, Ruth Walters, and Valsa George are a few.
Gulsher (John) , R. G. Bell, and Shahzia Batool.
Hira Akhtar, Goldheart Bird, and Cassandra Jasmine are quite young.
Poetheart Morgan and Ellias Anderson might write "better" in their native tongue.

Adeline Foster and Felicia DeAnn Manning are ages apart.
Noreen Carden and Unwritten Soul write from the heart.
"The King That Was Big Head"'s poems are dubious art, while
Cynthia Buhain Baello hits the poetry target with her poetic dart.

Valerie Law and Greg Davidson wrote poems ‘bout dementia.
Babbling Brookes is a poet friend.... now ‘in absentia'.
"Is It Poetry" and Luscious Larry write poems curious,
while those of Vanessa Hughes and Diane Hine.... should not worry us.

Kanav Justa and M. D. Dinesh Nair are two fellows to read,
while Fiona Pimentel and Beach Girl are poets worthy indeed.
I've left out plenty of poets whose poems I've bitten,
who have helped make Bri Edwards, with PoemHunter, smitten.

(January 9 & 11,2014)

Sunday, January 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poets
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
thank you PoemHunter and its members for sharing your poems and your comments and messages with me for the last year or two. i look forward to continued enjoyment/challenge on this site. good luck and happy 2014 to you all. :) bri

p.s. when i was making rhymes in the stanzas which named other members, i sometimes paid more attention to the rhyming than to the truth or fiction of what i was writing, though i would not say i told any lies really. i have not read ALL of the poems of any of the poets listed (i don't think) and some i may not like so much (the poems) . some of the poets i appreciate more for their comments and messages than for the poems i read by them. all that said, you take a look, if you wish, and be the judges for yourselves. :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 24 May 2015

Ah, good thing you didn't quit and are still around. Very entertaining, this one.

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Daniel Brick 14 June 2014

Bri Did you pull the VOLPONE ruse on us? You know the play by Ben Jonson in which the sly Volpone pretends to be dying so his relatives will cluster around him, giving him gifts because they hope to get his big inheritance. Then he is miraculously CURED and he settles back with his relatives' loving gifts. Regardless of your intentions, you penned a clever poem, I especially like the stanzas naming and rhyming all the poets who will inherit your Poetic Mantle. Celebrity status is being named in a Bri Edwards poem! !

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Bri Edwards 28 September 2023

Though I don't believe that I read or enjoyed much of Daniel's poetry, I REALLY appreciate his comment and the 'story' in it! I've heard D. B. has died 'recently'. RIP poet. bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 03 June 2015

i'm SURE the I'Ll in the title is a trick played on me by PH. but i'll leave it as is for now! :) :) :) bri

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Seema Jayaraman 01 November 2015

Thoroughly enjoyed your poem.. hilarious, the gene for comedy so dormant and dead in most of us is so active and kicking in you.. a true genius who commands comedy through poetry.. thank you for sharing. PS. I am one of the newbies who would definitely enjoy and appreciate your visits and comments.

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Kingsley Egbukole 26 September 2023

I appreciate your touch of humour whenever you write Bri. Since 2014 and you are still here. You will still be here because you are meant to be here for a purpose. That is 'TO ADD VALUE TO POETRY'

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Bri Edwards 25 September 2023

YES, 'many are gone', most without saying 'Bye bye' to me. : ( Se la vie.... or MAYBE not 'life', but DEATH in some cases. Well, 'IT' WILL happen to ALL.

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Bri Edwards 25 September 2023

GEE, ......HAS IT BEEN only....9+ YEARS SINCE PH PUBLISHED IT FOR ME? ? ? HA, ha! !

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Bri Edwards 05 November 2022

Ahem! My thanks to....ALL READERS and commenters of my poem, PAST, PRESENT, or FUTURE. Special thanks for HONEST comments, bri : )

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Valentin Savin 27 May 2018

Hi Brian, next time don't forget to mention me as well. I hope you don't see my information cruel or dishonest one. And you shall not hunt me down and tickle mercilessly because I'm coming from a broad!

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