I Love A Girl Poem by Lionel Dub

I Love A Girl

Rating: 5.0


I never met her,
Just on msn,
She send me pics of her,
And I do the same.

She has the skin so white as the winter,
Her lips and her nipple are red like the blood.
Her hairs are black like the forest,
And her in full body is so soft to caress.

In my world of war,
She is the light.
The war is stoping,
To do place at this light.

So beautiful and so cute,
She put me lot of hopless,
She is in my dream,
I am made of her.

Lionel Dub

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 April 2011

A very well penned and poignant write! The eyes saw and the heart spoke! Very romantic, I know, I have been there many times! Keep it up! You have a great talent! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Vaughn Bekker 23 May 2010

yes it is rather romantic, in its own sort of way, nice to have a bit of light to brighten up a dark situation, well done, nice write

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Marcella D 20 September 2009

aw in love so cute and romantic, nice job

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Lionel Dub

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Reims (51) , France
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