Treasure Island

luna light


I love you and miss you dad!


The day you died a pice of me died
too because i love you but i don't remember you,
I am sorry dad for being a brat,
but what could you do the only thing
to do you loved me back you gave me lots a pig back
rides, I never forget how perfective you were
if i hurt my knee you might hurt somebody because you care,


I love you dad my you rest in peace
an dad i have to say before you go
Love you and miss and before
i could say goodbye he left with a tear in his eye!

Submitted: Sunday, November 29, 2009

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  • Moonbee Canady (12/3/2009 6:30:00 PM)

    This Was A Very Touching and Beautiful Write... Tugs At The Hearstrings... It is also good sometimes, to let our feelings out on paper, It really helps... My Mom died when I was younger too... We Never Get Over The Death of A Loved One, But with Time, It Gets A (little easier) To Bear... Keep Writing, Kiddo, You've Got Talent... MoonBee (Oh, and I almost forgot, the comment you made regarding my poem 'My Shield, My Sentinel', yes Rosa, If You Put Yourself in God's Hands, He Does Indeed, Watch Over Us Personally... That Is The Honest - Truth... God Bless You and Keep You, Little One... MoonBee (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (12/1/2009 10:36:00 PM)

    Love is always love, no matter the time of lance of time or space...well-penned..you got my vote...10+++keep it up, you have plenty to show the whole world, .....(hope you can read my newly posted titled 'A LOVE'S DESIRE', enjoy it, comment and rated it, thanks for sharing, Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

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