I Love You Till I Die Poem by Beth Rhodes

I Love You Till I Die

Rating: 5.0

Before i met you,
nothing was true,
my happyness was a lie,
and i wanted to die,
from the day we met,
i can't forget,
the day you fell for me,
i was filled with glee,
the way you held my hand,
i could barely stand,
the way you held me near,
and said i had nothing to fear,
the way you said i love you,
i really thought it was true,
i tried holding the tears down,
when you looked at me and frowned,
you told me we needed to go our seperate ways,
i sat looking out into a daze,
you told me it was for the best,
i didn't want to hear the rest,
my heart was split in two,
my life was through,
i will always love you,
until my death date is due,
once more i say,
i will love you till that day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hugo Sanchez 20 November 2008

wow very well done, harsh words but nice poem. give you a ten

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