I'm Empty Now! Poem by keith brown

I'm Empty Now!

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I'm empty now!
water driven from a cup
Dry as a copra husk.
I'm sinking now!
blackhole sucked into
My minds labyrinth.
I'm deeper now!
Mariana, Delta
Deep as tumbling dirt
Falls
I'm gone now!

Sunday, May 3, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poignant write. Death is vividly depicted. Great imagery.

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Keith Brown 04 May 2020

Poems are strange things I had no idea where I was going when I penned the first line, I thought the muse was asleep and I was in fact empty, thanks very much for your comment if your like me your never really sure when you put the last full stop in, comments help

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