...I'M Just Visiting Poem by JoAnn McGrath

...I'M Just Visiting

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...I'm Just Visiting


In a world that seems so
incomprehensible
and awesomely enormous...
Where time is measured by the rotations
(not just gears in a clock)
I sit and ponder who came before
and the perplexing numbers that will follow
Then my modest mind gasps
...I'm just visiting


7 Feb 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coach Roth 08 February 2008

Short sweet and to the point. Coach

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Alice Affi 24 May 2008

Wow, this is so true and beautifully described...I'm adding it to my favorites!

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Melvina Germain 16 February 2008

This poem speaks the absolute truth, we are just visiting so we should enjoy every moment with relatives and friends and also take in the beauty of this earth. Excellent poem JoJo, a wonderful little treasure. Melvina

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David Harris 08 February 2008

JoAnn, your writing is getting more and more better with each day. We are all just just visiting and then we move on, but while we are visiting we must enjoy our stay. Top marks and thanks for sharing this little gem Lil sis. Big Bruv

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Thad Wilk 08 February 2008

Lovely write JoAnn! ! Always a pleasure to read! ! *10*! ! Best Wishes Friend Thad

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 08 February 2008

We all are just Tourist’s in a way, taking a few photo's then moving on our way, plenty of new vistors alas how short we stay...10

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