I'M Sorry Poem by Brooke Luchich

I'M Sorry

Rating: 5.0


I know I was the one who messed up everything that we had before,
For that I am truly sorry, I made a mistake and I know that for sure.
I lost the best thing in my life and I wish that I could take it all back,
The day that I walked away from you I literally felt my heart crack.
I had my reasons for doing what I did and I know you’ll never understand,
I thought I was doing the right thing but as usual nothing went as planned.
My chance with my first love was lost and I’m the only one to blame,
I should’ve known that playing with love is a dangerous game.
If you still love me, well that’s something I guess I’ll never know,
You’re so good at hiding things and not letting your emotions show.
I act like I don’t care when you’re around because there’s nothing I can say,
But the truth is I’ve never stopped loving you not even for one day.
I won’t blame myself for everything between us because that wouldn’t be fair,
You messed up to and I gave chance after chance, all because I really do care.
I gave up so much to be with you and put up with so much stuff too,
And you couldn’t even forgive me for the one wrong thing I did to you.
You made my life hard at times but all up you were the best part,
And if I could relive what we had again, I’d go right back to the very start.
Nothing that happened seems right but would I take it back? No, not ever,
Because “I love you, whenever, wherever and most importantly forever.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brooke Luchich 19 October 2009

Really? Maybe that's why we relate to each others poems so well :) ...

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Hailey Agnew 18 October 2009

his name was micheal? that was my first loves name. (how ironic...) alot of my heartbreak poems are about him.

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Brooke Luchich 15 October 2009

Thank you. It's kind of hard to teach but by reading my poems and how I do them and then practicing with your own then you should be able to pick it up :) ... Hmm well this boy was/has always been and will always be the complete love of my life.. His name was Michael and trust me you don't want to meet him lol

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Ahtivah Lawton 15 October 2009

I love the way u r able to rhyme ur words down to the core and still stay on task..please teach me how to do such a thing.....once again i luuv it...who is this boy that broke ur heart...cuz i wanna meet him...lol

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