I'm Waiting Poem by MAHTAB BANGALEE

I'm Waiting

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thy day of silence
full of love
with the sky rainbow

colors live inside
for touching
if outside feel good

there is no cloud berg
rains in eye
for the absent heart

you are everything
in love-life
for me on all way

and I tell the world
I'm waiting
for your coming day


-12/11/19 CTG, BD

Tuesday, November 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life,waiting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 November 2019

keep waiting and till then keep reading me MB OF BD UR LOVELY KEEP AT ITTTTTTTTTTT

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2019

Waiting for the right time. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 November 2019

We all are waiting for a day that may be really called the earth's day. A nice poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 November 2019

A lovely poem.....so lucid is the poetic expression! Loved reading this excellent work......10

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Kingsley Egbukole 12 November 2019

Beautifully articulated. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for sharing. Please kindly check my poems HOPE and THE BEAUTY OF DEATH and leave your comments.

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