I May Find You..... Poem by Aditya Tiwari

I May Find You.....

Rating: 3.8


Waiting for someone to fill the empty spaces
watching the shadows my soul still chases
hiding the pains, living in my memories
Hoping i may find you, somewhere in the stories

Trying to be awake in my sleep
searching the happiness, gone too deep
running from the dreams, but i can't refrain
Hoping i may find you, and live the moments again

walking on the roads i walked before
covering the truths behind the door
leaving myself alone, going back to start
hoping i may find you, live again in your heart

Thursday, May 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tim Kitchin 29 May 2014

Like the different aspects of seeking to understand what happened and reconnect to the past. The sense of yearning and emptiness is strong... Not sure why use more direct language e.g. 'the start'. Can't see a rhythmic reason not to...

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