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bhupender swarnakar

Rookie (2-10-1995 / earth)

i saw a heaven


I saw a heaven of grass and trees
From the top fall dark autum leaves
I saw a heaven with waterfall
Falling from Mrs.earth's artic stall
I saw a heaven with opera like rocks
There lived dogs like fox
I saw a heaven covered with ice
Jumping from the bottom a plenty of mice
I saw a heaven with no dead end
thereMessages never reached were they were send
So in short I saw a heaven
But I don’t exactly remember when

Submitted: Monday, April 05, 2010

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  • Rookie mohsin amin khan (4/16/2010 6:43:00 AM)

    HELLO VERY NICE EFFORT by you
    love nature more and breath always keeping nature in mind u can be a good poet
    have a great life (Report) Reply

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