I Still Do Poem by Cole Topp

I Still Do



Hey you the beautiful girl in my dreams, she can put you knees, with her smile it seems, she makes you think that your floating, but you’re farther down, then the ground.

But I still do, I swear I still do, I think about you, I dream about you, every night, and every day.

She passes through my mind, all the time, when I’m at home, when I’m alone, and when she glances at me, I swear I can see, her and I looking at the stars, because the moment is ours.

But I still do, I swear I still do, I think about you, I dream about you, every night, and every day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Cornish 28 July 2008

I like this, a lot but...... I would structure it somewhat differently: Hey you the beautiful girl in my dreams, she can put me on my knees, with her smile it seems, she makes you think that your floating, but you’re farther down, then the ground. But its your poem........ just a thought. Roger.

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