John Lars Zwerenz

Rookie - 274 Points (1-5-69 / Kew Gardens, New York, USA)

I Ventured Out Beneath The Moon... - Poem by John Lars Zwerenz

I ventured out beneath the moon, full, white and round...

I ventured out beneath the moon, full, white and round.
My boots broke the sheets of snow as I walked with the muse, my guide.
I approached the ocean and its starry, azure tide.
The breeze blew through my mind, yet I heard not a sound.

Then an angel arose, like a Siren on the waves.
Like a beautiful Phoenix, it came to me,
To take my soul beyond the skies, beyond the wild sea,
To eternal vistas, to shimmering, diamond enclaves.

I ascended to a rushing stream,
Beyond the realm of time, beyond a dream.
There I was welcomed by a gilded ball.

My love stood in a vestibule, and I heard the voice of God.
I had passed beyond the prison of earth, and though it might seem odd,
I found myself at home, loved by one and all.


Comments about I Ventured Out Beneath The Moon... by John Lars Zwerenz

  • Rookie - 343 Points F. J. Thomas (6/11/2014 7:56:00 AM)

    Most definitely a peaceful write John; painting a vivid story to follow :) Beautiful (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,046 Points Susan Lacovara (2/15/2014 2:07:00 PM)

    I invite you to read my poem, The Breath Of The Moon, as I felt very connected to this write. Well done...PEACE (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,957 Points Gajanan Mishra (12/9/2013 8:43:00 AM)

    hearing voice of God, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, December 9, 2013


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