I Want You Poem by Little Sunshine

I Want You

Rating: 4.7


i'm not gonna make you my friend by pressure
coz i don't want to
but I'm gonna make you sure
that i want you coz i need you
not only in the time of need but in every time
to make you understand that i want you to be by my side

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 31 August 2008

'I want you' is expressed very simply. Nice.

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Nathaniel Booker 01 September 2008

Your writings have such innocent expression to them and I find them inviting and beautiful. Be Well, Nate

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Rudy Hossam 07 September 2008

few words but full of meanings....thanks a lot for sharing

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Jack Tex 08 September 2008

I loved this one, the idea of wanting someone on account of needing them struck me, too. You are bound to be one of them big-time poets and that's for sure. You're open to love and you have such pure feelings for someone else, that shows you still have a soul, a caring loving soul and that's very much apprectiated.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008

'that i want you coz i need you'... another way of love. I love this lovely poem.

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Hazem Al Jaber 13 September 2009

Very nice poem. Interesting couplets. sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Anjali Sinha 01 November 2008

No pressure ---but pressure I want you! ! ! ! ! ! lovely +++10 regards anjali (read mine THE FIRST FIRST TIME WE MET)

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Emerald Gk 21 October 2008

The 'you' is what I want======= exclnt!

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 October 2008

clear-cut expression! lovely! ......10

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Serenity Prayer 02 October 2008

fanastic job. i understand and relate.

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